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Learning coloring with Asari...
And yes - this is the previous one but a bit enhanced :)
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You've got some really nice values and transitions in your shading, and I'm a huge fan of the subtle details like the brow lines and whatnot.

As you said, the angle of the eye is somewhat off, and thus it seems a bit too large.  And the neck could be made a bit smaller.

The thing that I would suggest is to try to eliminate the outlines within the figure.  Because this is just a portrait and there is no opportunity for contrast with the background, I think that keeping them on the outside is fine.  However, it is actually quite rare to see two parts of a figure distinguished by a clean black line.

I hope that this is helpful, and keep up the excellent work.  :)